Friday 1 April 2011

The script of our film-Written by Rabbi

Voices: Script
Key: 
 (.) - pause (however many seconds)
 ** - stage directions and camera movements
# - any sounds made e.g. muffling or mumbling
A little video flash of faces of everybody involved.

Scene 1
*beep, beep, beep, beep* alarm clock goes off (5.59am)

*Joe’s (killer) hand reaches out to turn alarm off*

*camera screen opens up as if an eye is opening from darkness to light*

Joe: # light grunting and yawn #

*Two feet come down on floor and slide into slippers*

*Pan up to show the Joes body as he is walking but we don’t show his face (tracking shot used)*

*Camera is showing Joe’s point of view*

*camera turns and moves towards bathroom whilst grabbing a hoodie and putting it on, covering half his face*

*now camera moves into audiences view and shows half his face with expressionless ‘evil’ grin in the mirror*

*Walks up to cork board (in bathroom) and crosses one more photo out with a big ‘X’*

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Scene 2

*Jenny and Olivia walk into living room of Olivia’s house*

Olivia: Well, this is my house, make yourself comfortable

Jenny: Thanks, where are your parents?

Olivia: They’re out for a while

Jenny: Oh, I see (2) wow you really have some kind view in the back garden don’t you?

*Jenny looks out the window and glares at the gloomy forest area behind the house, and a close up on the locket around her neck*

Olivia: Huh? (1) Yeah, I guess so; don’t really notice to be honest

Jenny: You’re brave, living here and not being frightened of something coming to get you (2) *does uneasy laugh* I wouldn’t have the guts, ha

Olivia: Oh come on, I don’t believe in all that rubbish

*Jenny cannot help herself but to look out the window as her mind wanders off into the forest*
Olivia: Jenny? (2) Jenny? Hello? What are you looking at?

Jenny: Oh (1) uh, nothing

Olivia: Oh, well I’m very tired so I’ll snooze for a while, there’s food in the kitchen, so you know help yourself

Jenny: Oh, Um, Ok I guess? *now has a concerned face, but just sits down as she watches Olivia gently nod off into a deep sleep*

*Jenny is bored and wonders what she could do as her friend sleeps, she walks into the kitchen and notices the back door is open. She goes to close it, as she does she hears some voices calling her, she looks back thinking it could be Olivia but realises Olivia is still asleep (quick shot showing Olivia asleep). She looks in front of her again, now the door is open fully but as far as she remembers she didn’t even touch the handle.  Again Jenny hears voices calling; she steps outside to see who or what it is. Jenny follows the voices continuously without realising that she is walking deeper and deeper into the forest.*

Jenny: Olivia is that you?

Jenny: Who’s there? *in a restless and scared voice*

Voices: Jenny... Jenny... Jenny... *whispers carry on and drag her more into the forest*

Jenny: Seriously, whoever is playing a joke just stop because I will find you!

#twig snaps#

*jenny turns in horror*

*camera shows close up on Jenny’s eyes and speedily zooms out*

*Jenny’s eyes wide open, not blinking, she is speechless*

Jenny: who...who *barely getting a word out, she is so terrified*

Joe: Hello Jenny I’ve waiting for you

*camera shows a shot of Joe, he is stood there with a mirror shard in his hand*

Jenny: *screams*

*jenny runs as fast as possible while the killer is running after her*

*Jenny runs into the house, screams start to take over any other sound, this is when a flash of Olivia’s face is shown, close up, she is fidgeting, restless, flash of Jenny running upstairs, flash of Olivia, flash of Jenny and then continuing like this for a while*

Jenny: *screams for her life* please, please, don’t kill me, I beg of you, please! *cries*

Joe (Killer): It’s too late for begging now Jenifer! *does hysterical laugh*

Jenny: But, but, I don’t...aaaaa no! *cries* Olivia wake up! Wake up Olivia! Somebody help me!

*Killer gets of Jenny, Olivia’s face is flashed, then back to close up of killers face as he brutally cuts parts of jenny’s body*

*Olivia is now shown very restless and uncomfortable and she is wanting to break away from this dream but it's as if something is holding her down and forcing her to see all this*

*flashing back to Jenny’s body as it is being pulled into the mirror that stands against a wall, Jenny’s hand clawing against the floor*

*Olivia hears a very loud smash of glass; this breaks her out of her dream. Olivia is in a state of shock, she is panting and gasping for breath, until she realise jenny is gone. Olivia pounces up and starts frantically looking around for Jenny, this is when she starts hearing those same whispering voices, they force Olivia to walk upstairs.*

Olivia: Jenny? *nearly starting to cry* Jenny? Oh God Jenny where are you? Please tell me this is some kind of  a joke.

*Olivia is starting to get really worried now*

*She slowly steps up the stairs, eyes alert for anything suspicious, although still all she can her are those eerie voices taunting her and calling her name*

*Olivia then walks into her parents bedroom and to her terror she sees the most unexpected thing*

*Blood and pieces of mirror glass is spread everywhere in the room, the walls, the floor, the bed covers*

Olivia: *screams, drops to the floor and just stares at what is in front of her, she breaks down and cries 
constantly*

*Her eyes follow the trail of blood and smashed pieces of glass (P.O.V shot)that is leading towards the mirror, which also to her surprise is completely fine, not even a scratch on it*

*Olivia then notices something shining on the floor near the mirror, she stands and walks to it, as she gets closer she realises what it is and picks it up. It’s Jenny’s locket. Olivia stares at it while her eyes fill up with tears, then she looks up at the mirror and sees a horrifying reflection of  Jenny, all covered in cuts and blood, eyes trying to tell her something but Olivia can’t really make it out. Olivia looks back and sees nothing and when she turns back to look at the mirror she screams.....*

The End.

Voices. 

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